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For this new draft, I edited the 'floor' for each stage to make it more consistent as compared to the previous one where only the 2 stages had a straight line right to the end of the abstraction. I also straightened the 'nose' of the boat for the third and fourth stage. In addition, I changed the buildings and the shelter of my chosen abstraction (the 3rd stage). The buildings are now short tall tall, tall short tall, from short tall short, short short. As for the shelter, I changed the stand from 2 lines to 1 instead.



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